Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts

Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Allusion Poem- "Looking Around"

It is simply illogical.

This world I’m in,

It’s strange

It’s new

It’s changing


Curiosity and determination

compel me to venture forward


Steps get awkward

I feel clumsy

How is it possible to feel so out of place?


Let me out of this

‘dream-world’

I want to escape.


With a stroke of luck

I’ve found a way to fit in

(although it must have been something I ate)

It works too well,

now the world is big around me

as if I were shrinking

People intimidate

Problems complicate


Yet,

When I’m small

I see simplicity.

doors close,

but another just appears

getting back on my feet,

colors change

saturated to vivid


On second thought,

I wouldn’t mind going down that rabbit hole again

Thursday, March 25, 2010

Have you read the newspaper lately?



Take a look at the front page...
Now that's something to get excited about!


THIS JUST IN! The website URL has just been released on the
G-201 Networking Station:

Love it? Hate it? Questions? Comments?
Let me know, post it below.
MAHALO!! :D

Thursday, March 11, 2010

Metaphor Poem Debrief

It was easy to explain what a metaphor was. It took a little more thought, though, to come up with an example. So to top it off, we were assigned to write our own metaphor poem THEN create a video illustrating it. Insane isn't it? It was fun anyway. :D

Originally I chose to compare myself with fireworks- because of the variety of colors and sparks, as well as the loads of energy they give off when lit up. I realized later that it would be difficult to film this because it was already February and fireworks in this time (especially aerials) are illegal.

The true reason why I picked a t-shirt as my metaphor was because the due date for writing the poem was inching closer, and I didn't have one yet. I was actually talking on the phone to Shaneika about it (it was about the same time as Ecybermission) and I was clearly stressing out while pacing my room. I was just listing off items I saw, and a t-shirt was one of them. As I thought more closely about the possible adjectives of a t-shirt, I figured that it suited me well.

My poem used a lot of describing words.. adjectives to show how I am most like a t-shirt. Comforting, belonging, laughs, creativity. While shooting my video I kept in mind that I wanted to have a voice over, so for most of the parts I needed to relay the message without sound. I didn't changed angles for the shots as much as I wanted to, but with what I had, I was able to insert some special effects that made up for the lack of angles. Also, in the video, the lighting was pretty good all the way through... well except for the ending, but I actually needed it dark to show the light contrast coming from my shirt.

I learned that I should probably choose a backup or plan B for the next project I have to do- so that when one doesn't work out, I won't spend as much time at square one again. Also, using media I now am better at using copyright free clips of music to make my own background sounds. Now that I think about it, writing poetry is really hard if it is forced... I mean, I did want to write a good poem, but I've never written a 'real' one before, so this was a big step. I sat at my desk at home looking at a piece of paper for at least half an hour, with only my name on it. I give credit to those famous poets. They are great for actually coming up with all those literary elements in their poems. (I wonder if they talk like that too.. hmmmm :D )

Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Metaphor Poems- Journal 31

1. The Road Not Taken
By: Robert Frost
2. Life is but a Dream
By: Lewis Carroll

3. Shirt
By: Carl Sandburg

4. Defense of Fort McHenry (The Stars and Stripes Forever)
By: Francis Scott Key
http://poemhunter.com/poem/defence-of-fort-mchenry-the-stars-and-stripes-fo/

5. Self Metaphor Poem

Sunday, February 21, 2010

The Message of a T-shirt

I express
by color and design
by feelings and creativity
I am a t-shirt
I may be that one shirt you go to for comfort
for laughs
for the feeling of belonging.
I am practical in most situations,
although once in a while, I feel out of place.
T-shirts are special,
they are common and simple but they can say a lot
I am a t-shirt

Monday, February 15, 2010

Journal #27: Brainstorming Metaphor Poem

Mulan (the only asian Disney Princess, haha): Mulan's characteristics pretty much line up with mine. She is a brave, self-relient, and independent individual. She is an outspoken teenager that is a bit clumsy at times too. Mulan works hard, and is true to her heart (yeah, I know there's a song in the movie with this :D )
[and as a bonus, she's chinese... Yay! :D ]

T-Shirt: I think this would be an easier metaphor to film, although it took me a while to brainstorm how I am a t-shirt. T-shirts can be fun and creative, funny, or made to make a specific statement. They can show people that the person wearing it belongs to a group (and this relates to me by how I talk to people and make them feel welcome), for sports or a club. They are very common, yet they are practical and vary in many different ways to make each unique.