Hello there KORIE!! Very nice portrayal of coming of age!! I love the whole idea of food, yet it represents the choices you make in life. For example, broccoli is healthy and good for you and at the same time it represents values and things that really matter in life. Where on the other hand, the cake may be very delicious but having too much of it could harm you, just like in real life. Also love how the silhouette is choosing the chocolate cake over the broccoli. It represents the common choices that teenagers make these days. WELL DONE! I don't think you need to make any revisions on this. It actually looks like a poster and it really demonstrates coming of age really well.
Hi Korie, I agree with Shaneika...this is an excellent poster and combines graphics and text very skillfully.... My only suggestion would be to see if you could make the metaphors consistent...think about food and how we'd discard food...and also what food does for your body...what do morals do and for what part of you?
Hello there KORIE!!
ReplyDeleteVery nice portrayal of coming of age!!
I love the whole idea of food, yet it represents the choices you make in life.
For example, broccoli is healthy and good for you and at the same time it represents values and things that really matter in life. Where on the other hand, the cake may be very delicious but having too much of it could harm you, just like in real life.
Also love how the silhouette is choosing the chocolate cake over the broccoli. It represents the common choices that teenagers make these days.
WELL DONE!
I don't think you need to make any revisions on this. It actually looks like a poster and it really demonstrates coming of age really well.
EXCELLENT JOB AGAIN!
~Shaneika
Hi Korie,
ReplyDeleteI agree with Shaneika...this is an excellent poster and combines graphics and text very skillfully....
My only suggestion would be to see if you could make the metaphors consistent...think about food and how we'd discard food...and also what food does for your body...what do morals do and for what part of you?
Great start!
mrs s