Saturday, November 14, 2009

KC3 Rough Draft: Undersea Intruders

The Hawaiian Islands are basically several volcanic rocks, isolated in the middle of the Pacific Ocean. This fact may have people questioning why anyone want to visit, much less live there. With our humid, subtropical year-round weather, one of the first places locals and tourists alike head to are the many beaches. Unlike man-made pools, taking a dip in the ocean is swimming in Mother Nature's aquarium. For those lucky enough to snorkel in a Hawaiian beach, or at least watch a documentary on Hawaii's reefs, you've probably seen schools of bright, colorful fish. Many people, including residents here, assume that all the marine animals are native. As hard as it is to believe, Hawaii, as much as anywhere else, has invasive animals intruding and altering the underwater ecosystem.

Currently, a rising concern of invasive marine species have been the ta'ape (blue-lined snapper), the to'au (black-tailed snapper), and the roi (blue-spotted grouper/peacock grouper). All three fish were introduced to the islands in 1950. Ta'ape, to'au, and roi were caught around the reefs of Tahiti, and released in Hawaiian waters intentionally, as a game fish, in hopes of boosting the declining local fish stocks. In these fishes' native habitats, their population is lower in numbers, as they have natural predators. Yet, in Hawaii, they thrive.

Hawaii's sub-tropical waters is a great place to breed ta'ape, to'au, and roi, being that there are no natural predators to control these invasive species' population. To survive, they eat smaller fish, such as parrotfish and surgeonfish. The Honolulu Advertiser quoted, "A University of Hawaii (UH) study estimated that in a three-square-mile area off the Kona Coast, roi eat 99 tons of reef fish annually- the equivalent of 8.2 million fish." The same article also stated that roi consumes about 146 reef fish per year. In the beginning years of these three fish being introduced, scientists did not see these alien species as a problem. "Roi seems to be filling a [food chain] role opened up by humans," said scientist Jan Dierking, of UH. Now people are starting to agree that invasive fish, especially ta'ape, to'au, and roi, are populating too much. One reason why roi's population is continuing to grow is answered by marine biologist, Norton Chan, at the Waikiki Aquarium. He explained that invasive species introduced to a foreign habitat do not have immediate natural predators. One way to control the over population of these fish is for humans to catch them. However, we don't usually eat them. "It [roi] has a stigma for the likelihood of ciguatera toxins," comments Chan.

Communities in Hawaii actually have begun to realize that invasive species, like ta'ape, to'au, and roi are depleting the reef of native and local fish. Darrel Tanaka, an avid diver from Maui, is one of them. "We wanted to make a tournament [for divers], but we didn't want to deplete the reefs, so we made it for invasive species," he stated. "Maui doesn't have the fish it used to have 10 to 20 years ago. This is a way to give back to the reefs." Maui's idea of 'Roi-Round-Ups' have recently spread to other islands, including Oahu.



Bibliography

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Chan, Norton. "KC3 Invasive and Alien Aquatic Animals/Plants." Personal interview. 23 Oct. 2009.

Harris, Jason. "KC3 Invasive and Alien Land Animals/Plants." Personal interview. 23 Oct. 2009.

Rayson, Ann. Modern history of Hawai'i. Honolulu: Bess, 2004. Print.

"Species found at O?ahu-Hanauma Bay RA." Bishop Museum. Web. 6 Nov. 2009. .

Walsh, W.J. "Fact Sheet: Hawaii's Reef Fishes Are in Steep Decline." Web. 28 Oct. 2009. .

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Zoo-to-You- Island Invaders: Don't let aliens invade Hawaii. Honolulu: Honolulu Zoo Society, 2006. Print.

5 comments:

  1. heyy KORIE!!:0--- I mean :)
    Okay. Well first I want to congratulate you on another well written paper! There are no grammar problems as far as I can tell...so I'll just go ahead and assess you on the writing standards.
    Word choice: I think you chose your words really well. They are effective and you didn’t over use the words. For example (ciguatera toxins, depleting, consumes and so on.)
    Ideas: Your essay is focused and you have good and reliable references. For example:
    The Honolulu Advertiser quoted, "A University of Hawaii (UH) study estimated that in a three-square-mile area off the Kona Coast, roi eat 99 tons of reef fish annually- the equivalent of 8.2 million fish."
    One reason why roi's population is continuing to grow is answered by marine biologist, Norton Chan, at the Waikiki Aquarium.
    --- The only thing I would recommend is to elaborate more on the other invasive species, because it seems like you’re mainly talking about the roi fish and not enough on the other fish.
    Organization: You have good transitions and your paper flows smoothly... One suggestion is to have a more “memorable” conclusion.
    Voice: Your writing shows that you wrote this essay and it is very creative. I can tell that you know enough about your essay to get your paper to focus.
    Overall I think you did well on your essay and keep up the good work:)

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  2. hey Kor Kor!! Heheh
    Okay, so you can kinda tell its me already.
    So, on your first paragraph:
    you forgot to add the letter y to the word luck[y].
    And an to the word Hawaii[an].

    Oh and look in your third paragraph, you put "game fish" and "Norton Chan" in there. OMG!! I remember the interview.

    Oh and it's ciguatera toxins. I thought it was something else. You probably noticed that I spelled it wrong on the Interview Transcript I gave you.

    6 Traits:

    Ideas:
    You have a lot of supporting details and references. You really focused your essay. I love it. I absolutely do. Oh, I could already hear you saying: Thank you. Thank you very much. (Elvis Presley style)

    Word Choice:
    Very simple words. That's good because it helps the reader to focus more on the content of the essay.

    Organization:
    Overall, good organization. I liked how it, under my own understanding, goes at a introduction, cause, effect, effect mode. What happened to your conclusion paragraph. I knew you were missing something.

    Voice: I can really tell that it was you who wrote the essay and no one else, just by the way I look at it, the content, and the fact that your name is stated at the left side of your blog.

    C&P: No grammatical errors or punctuation errors.

    OMG!! If I were to grade this, it would a total and absolute 4!! Man you are good at this kind of thing. Hey, could you like help me as well.
    Like what Maddie said, Keep up the good work!!
    WOW!! I can already see you having straight A's in English. :)

    CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

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  3. A L O H A,
    Korie Lum(:

    Ideas:
    I think that your paper has a lot of supporting details. Your paper was focused on your topic and you can tell that you know a lot of about this topic (:

    Word Choice:
    The words you used are not overdone. You seemed to have used plain and simple words. However, it made your essay easy to read and understand.

    Organization:
    Your organization, overall is pretty good. Every detail falls into the right place. Suggestion, You should have a more effective conclusion, don't you think? (:

    Voice:
    hmm, your essay was very creative and clever. I can tell from this paper that you wrote it.


    uhm, good job!
    like shaneika said,
    "If I were to grade this, it would a total and absolute 4!! "

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  4. Hi Korie,
    Like your other commenters, I think this was a clear and well developed essay. I think Maddie has a point (she took mine ;) about saying a bit more about ta'ape and to'au.
    And I agree with Shaneika that the essay seems to need a conclusion.
    As far as mechanics, just proofread carefully. There are a few small errors, some already pointed out in the other commentary.
    Good job!
    mrs s

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  5. hey korie!

    we just video chatted with you and your group. we are the english class from new jersey. i was the good looking one in the dark green shirt and tie sitting on the floor. i thought you guys did a wonderful job. i dont know anything else to say, so bye!

    ----Will <3

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